New Fragment: La-La

In Gmail, another idea I had today, called it La-La, as I was singing with "La-La" to find a melody for vocals.

So the guitar that comes in at 00:13 is actual the vocal melody.

Let's discuss if it's worth pursuing further.

I like it ... I'll do it on GarageBand tomorrow ... to have a better idea ...
PS: Don't forget to mention the tempo and the key ... thanxs

Oh yes, forgot.

Tempo: 143
Key: A

J'ai poster une nouvelle version avec un couplet.

Il y'a une version avec melodie chante (la melodie guitare avec filter wah) et une version sans "voix".

Posted another version with voice melody.

Added a bass on the last part

Added Synths for Intro, Bridge and finale

Added a solo as a first draft, needs a bit of refinement on the harmonized part

Excellent dude!!!! Love it ...Ii'll try something on it, later on ... The only thing that could be done is to speed up the tempo a bit ... like 150 or so ...
What I really like is the verse ... guitars and synth ... one after the other .... we've never done that! It sounds awsome!

Duke a écrit:Excellent dude!!!! Love it ...Ii'll try something on it, later on ... The only thing that could be done is to speed up the tempo a bit ... like 150 or so ...

Yeah I thought the same when I listened to it earlier. Doing that I'd need to re-record the guitars and the bass, but they're not that great sound wise anyways. Or maybe I can use some audio-processing instead if I'm lazy.

For the time being ... you can just process it ...

Made a version on 155Bpm, it's better - see gmail.

Just did the compress on the master though, so for a proper redo, it would need more work, but maybe not needed. All synths etc are no problem to change, as they are Midi, not audio.

I posted something (with the old tempo) ... check Gmail box!

Duke a écrit:I posted something (with the old tempo) ... check Gmail box!

It's a great start!

Maybe it would be good to hear the vocals on top of the version without vocal melody played (by the wah wah guitar).

Here's what I had in mind when I wrote/recorded the parts.
Verse: I had thought of this question & answer thing between the chugging guitar and then in between those guitar riffs what I imagined to be some dark/bad vocals, not too much melody, but rather a bit mystic ...
Chorus: ...and then go to a hymn like singing in the refrain in-line with the melody I proposed (could even add choirs to make it more dramatic à la Nabucco) - full on sung from the stomach - if you know what I mean? A bit like him from 1:30 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1k08yxu57NA

If you have something very specific in mind ... you can sing ... So, I'll have a better idea about what you have intended ...

Duke a écrit:If you have something very specific in mind ... you can sing ... So, I'll have a better idea about what you have intended ...

Nah I leave that up to you. Just giving some thoughts, but I did like your version, too!

No I don't mind ... you might have something great in mind ... so do it ... if I don't like it I will tell you, no problem!

Aïe aïe, I don't like very much this song, my friends...
Too slow, too kind (c'est le bon mot pour "gentil" ?).
I like only the first 13 seconds...